- We need to find music
- We need a full screen when LIzzie is in the corner screen
- We need to change the name of our coursework as its not very effective - a subsiquent suggestion is 'Unfaithful'
- We need to edit our 'Dead Dogs' title to make it look more proffesional
- There is a white bit during the 'Twenthy Century Fox' and we have to edit that out
- We also need to take out the 'and' in the shot of '...and Alex MacPhail'
We are going to take all of this onboard and will continue to work on our footage to make it better than it already is.

1 comment:
After watching your film opening again it is obvious you have changed a lot of things in the last week. There is a very good storyline and there is good use of different filming techniques. You might want to add in a few more shots of lizzie to show more knowlege of camera angles
(James)
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